Narnia Fan Fiction: Letters to Polly (Part 1)

How did Professor Kirke feel when he first heard that Lucy has been to Narnia? Here’s a glimpse through his letter to his old friend. By the way, this is my first attempt at fan fiction of any kind, so any suggestions will be most welcome. You can find part 2 here.

My dear friend Polly,

I hope this letter finds you in the best of health. I must smile a bit while writing your name because indeed, Polly is a funny name. I know you are thinking that it is not half so funny as Digory, and if you were here, we could go on about it, like we did as children.

I’m writing to share with you some news that will surprise you for sure. A month ago, I received a telegram from Mrs. Helen Pevensie of Finchley – I do not know if you remember her, she was a distant relation of my Aunt Letty. It is the usual story – the father is fighting in the war, the air raids are going on about London, and the mother knows their house in the middle of the city is not safe, especially for her children. Mrs. Pevensie cannot leave the house for fear that the dreaded telegram from the War Office should come one day and not find her there, but she implored me to take in her four children since she knew the country is much safer than the city. I remember how you adamantly told me once that London is not a beastly hole, but indeed it is, especially during these trying times.

I had no qualms in agreeing to her request, since it can get lonely out here with only my trusty housekeeper, Mrs. Macready, and the handful of servants to keep me company. You know that even I am a bit afraid of Mrs. Macready, so I thought it would be interesting to suddenly have four bustling children running around the country house.

More than a week ago, the four Pevensie children arrived, and such well-behaved children they were, except for one who is a bit of a rascal. The oldest boy is named Peter, and you’d think he was older than he really was. I reckon it’s because he is the oldest among the four, and so is taking on the role of the absent father for his siblings. The next one is named Susan, quite a lovely young lady and very mature for her age. She reminds me a lot of her mother, Mrs. Pevensie. The third is the rascal I mentioned earlier, who is named Edmund. I will admit something to you and trust that you will not repeat this to anyone else, but this boy Edmund reminds me a lot of myself when I was his age. The youngest is a dear little girl named Lucy, who is a favorite among the servants for her sweet smile and coaxing manners.

I noticed that they made sure never to disturb me – probably one of the rules of Mrs. Macready that I do not know about – except one morning when Peter and Susan knocked timidly at my study door. I hastened to find chairs for them and told them that I was at their disposal, and they begun to share such wonderful news. The youngest child, Lucy, has entered Narnia through the magical wardrobe in my country house! I’m sure you remember that the wardrobe was made from the apple tree I planted years ago, from the apple that Aslan himself handed to me for my sick mother.

While they were telling their story, I could not move out of surprise and a sudden flooding of memories – the Wood between the Worlds, the creation of Narnia, the cabby and the horse Strawberry whom we accidentally brought along – or should we call them King Frank and Fledge now?

Here comes the sad news however. Narnia is under a spell by a powerful enchantress whom Narnians refer to as the White Witch. She is styling herself as the Queen of Narnia, and I wonder whatever happened to King Frank and Queen Helen (remember how she first appeared in Narnia with soapsuds up to her elbows?). We have no idea how Narnian time has passed since we’ve been there last, so this White Witch could be anybody. But I have a sinking feeling that it could be none other than Jadis, the Queen of Charn, whom I woke up from her magical slumber. It is an act I have since regretted much – even though both you and Aslan have graciously forgiven me – but never more so than now.

The older children are afraid that their sister is going mad, because they found nothing special or magical about the wardrobe when they went to investigate. I was surprised that they never even considered the possibility that Lucy is telling the truth, even though it is the most logical explanation. What do they teach at schools these days?

I will write to you again when I have more news. I have a feeling that this is not the end of the children’s adventures in Narnia.

Ever your friend,

Digory Kirke

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7 thoughts on “Narnia Fan Fiction: Letters to Polly (Part 1)

  1. This is great Terb 🙂 I think you and I must have forgotten to wear our tinfoil hats though because this is very similar to something I wrote. It’s very interesting to see what things you did differently with the same basic idea.

    The “No disturbing of the Proffesor” thing was only in the movie though. And I find it a little unlikely that Mrs. Pevensie would actually have known the Proffessor. Very few host families knew the the families that the children came from.

    A lovely piece anyway. I love the bit about ‘Polly’ being a strange name *chuckles*

    Here is the link to my very similar story.
    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3551788/1/The_Narnia_Letters

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  2. I don’t know you and you don’t know me but I thought this was absolutely great.
    A few grammatical errors but other than that it was quite appealing to the Narnian fan.

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  3. Wow, thanks Destrier! I do hope you’d point out the grammatical errors though, my problem is that I don’t have anyone to edit my work.

    And Swanwhite, you just pulled the rug out of me. I didn’t copy your idea, I promise! I just read it now and was shocked to see how similar it was to mine. *sighs* Part 2 would have been a lot like your Polly’s journal (from The Narnia Letters) and The Bell and the Hammer. Now I don’t know if I still have the heart to write it, seeing it’s been done before (and very well too).

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  4. Well done Terb!
    Ok, so what, it’s like Swan’s. (NO offense to Swanwhite intended) Both of you did a fabulous job.
    When you wrote it, you hadn’t even read Swan’s yet. I think it would be rather interesting to see how you would do part 2 now that you have read hers. I’d love to see you keep going (without trying to copy) so long as Swan doesn’t mind.

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  5. I liked this a lot. I read Swanwhite’s also, and they were both very similar, but don’t give up! There are lots of other characters who you can write about, perhaps something Alberta Scrubb wrote to a friend when her son came back from Narnia for the first time.

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  6. Hey Lea, I like that idea! Alberta’s letter to a friend about how common Eustace has become… That will definitely be on my list. However, I decided to go on and finish my part 2 – making sure I make it different from Swan’s, like Aravir mentioned. Thanks for everyone’s comments! It’s actually new to me to get feedback about anything I write. =)

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  7. I love it, Terb! I’ve wanted to write something like that myself for quite a while, but never actually sat down to it. You did a great job. I like the part about Edmund reminding the Professor of himself.
    I hope you don’t mind me commenting when you don’t know me.

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